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CRITIQUE.STY


This stylesheet is meant to be used for Writer's Workshops, where manuscripts are critiqued by colleagues.  It's been my experience that most writers appreciate written comments in addition to any oral critique -- and they appreciate TYPED comments even mor
e.  Nevertheless, you could print out this sheet as-is (without comments) and write your comments by hand, if need be.


You should note two things:


1)  You need to double click on the frame at the top of the stylesheet and insert your name where all that bracketed instruction is -- otherwise, your critique won't be very personal


2)  I've decided to use styles instead of frames for each major "element" of the fiction manuscript you should critique.  This way you can add/use your own criteria instead of that listed here.  This method also allows you to use more than one page.  Howeve
r, you must now be cautious of deleting these lines (especially before choosing Style|Save as a Stylesheet from the menubar) while editing your critique.

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